Nebula like clouds wondered around them as they past through this strange tunnel, which seemed like a pathway in outer space.
Jonathan was now starting to feel an uneasy sense of fear inside himself, because the further he went, the more memories he was starting to lose. Each hour he past, each detail of all of his memories began to fade, like the erosion of rocks against the crashing ocean of time. By the time Jonathan almost felt like he couldn't remember his own name, The brass skin figure placed his left hand on his right shoulder and pointed with his right to a large nebula like cloud which seemed like it was filled with bright, glaring, burning stars. The figure said to Jonathan "Your path starts here. Go, and we will meet again." Jonathan took each step slowly to this cloud he was suppose to enter. By the time Jonathan took his seventh step, a flash of light sucked him in and everything was black again, but this time his vision came back to him quicker.
When Jonathan gained clarity, he saw exquisite beauty around him.
Thursday, February 25, 2010
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
Chapter 2: The Universe After Death Part-1
Everything that Jonathan can only see in his vision was pitch black. Jonathan never had felt so confused and terrified ever.
He tries turning his head, but something was wrong. He can get a small sense that his head was turning, but it felt like every muscle in his head and body were completely numb. All that Jonathan can remember was that there was a quick, but painful blast of heat and a blinding flash of light. That's all that Jonathan can remember, he wasn't even able to think of anything else, as though his mind was immobilized in some sort of loss of free will.
Suddenly, small sensations were starting, as though he was gaining some muscle sensations back. Jonathan's body felt different,
It felt like an entirely different body. he can feel that he has a different nose, a different shape of a body. Sensations of sickness, hunger and flushness went through Jonathan's body. Vision was coming back to Him. But when he was able to see clearly, Jonathan now wished he had no vision. Countless numbers of different people were moaning and weeping in tears with their thick milky eyes which seemed like the worst conditions of cataract. The Bodies of the people were far worse. Their physique were as those of third world refugees suffering from famine. The texture of these peoples skins were as those of a mummified corpses.
"Where am I..." He thought to him self. All that Jonathan can say verbally were moans and grunts. He was tortured over the thought that this was his afterlife. "What did I do to deserve this?" He thought to him self. Jonathan tried to scream as hard as he can to get some sort of sense that this was some sort of a bad dream, or what the mind is conjuring up in a coma he tried to thought. All that came out were moans. The realm was fogged by clouds of ash and smoke. The realm seemed like it was twilight every passing hour he went through, no change in this dim world. This state became worse when a year past. After living in this state for a year, he almost lost all hope. Suddenly, the people around him trembled when a thunderous sound pierced the air with a glaring pillar of light illuminated in front of him and the people around him. A bald headed figure with clean cloths of white and purple linen and soft healthy skin which the color resembled of brass. This figure was a male, who's face was as calm as the moon, but the expression of kindness was as radiant as the sun. This radiant man gently gave out his left hand to Jonathan and said to him with a clear voice, "You have been wrongfully Judged. I'm here to take you were you rightfully belong."
Overwhelmed, Jonathan Took his hand and his mummified like body replenished into a great figure with silver hair. Jonathan and this strange radiant figure vanished from this world and traveled through this worm hole full of glowing nebula-like clouds.
The destination that they will be going will be in Part-2 of Chapter 2.
He tries turning his head, but something was wrong. He can get a small sense that his head was turning, but it felt like every muscle in his head and body were completely numb. All that Jonathan can remember was that there was a quick, but painful blast of heat and a blinding flash of light. That's all that Jonathan can remember, he wasn't even able to think of anything else, as though his mind was immobilized in some sort of loss of free will.
Suddenly, small sensations were starting, as though he was gaining some muscle sensations back. Jonathan's body felt different,
It felt like an entirely different body. he can feel that he has a different nose, a different shape of a body. Sensations of sickness, hunger and flushness went through Jonathan's body. Vision was coming back to Him. But when he was able to see clearly, Jonathan now wished he had no vision. Countless numbers of different people were moaning and weeping in tears with their thick milky eyes which seemed like the worst conditions of cataract. The Bodies of the people were far worse. Their physique were as those of third world refugees suffering from famine. The texture of these peoples skins were as those of a mummified corpses.
"Where am I..." He thought to him self. All that Jonathan can say verbally were moans and grunts. He was tortured over the thought that this was his afterlife. "What did I do to deserve this?" He thought to him self. Jonathan tried to scream as hard as he can to get some sort of sense that this was some sort of a bad dream, or what the mind is conjuring up in a coma he tried to thought. All that came out were moans. The realm was fogged by clouds of ash and smoke. The realm seemed like it was twilight every passing hour he went through, no change in this dim world. This state became worse when a year past. After living in this state for a year, he almost lost all hope. Suddenly, the people around him trembled when a thunderous sound pierced the air with a glaring pillar of light illuminated in front of him and the people around him. A bald headed figure with clean cloths of white and purple linen and soft healthy skin which the color resembled of brass. This figure was a male, who's face was as calm as the moon, but the expression of kindness was as radiant as the sun. This radiant man gently gave out his left hand to Jonathan and said to him with a clear voice, "You have been wrongfully Judged. I'm here to take you were you rightfully belong."
Overwhelmed, Jonathan Took his hand and his mummified like body replenished into a great figure with silver hair. Jonathan and this strange radiant figure vanished from this world and traveled through this worm hole full of glowing nebula-like clouds.
The destination that they will be going will be in Part-2 of Chapter 2.
Monday, February 22, 2010
Chapter 1: The Strife On Earth.
Jonathan was born with a condition that nobody notices (since he spoke so fluently and so articulately). He never even told his friends from his own church, which were the only closest friends he knew. Unfortunately, since he gets easily confused with some of their complex sarcasms and their attention towards worldly things, he was commonly left out of their activities.
during his child hood, Jonathan placed his full trust on the Mormon church Because his parents were very devout. The disgusting behaviors he witnessed from bullies at high school that took drugs, smuggle smut magazines, and violently beaten up kids, Jonathan obviously wanted no part of the world.
through his teen years, Jonathan was diagnosed with depression.
There were a lot of reasons why his depression was connected towards his faith.
the first reason was that he had scary experiences with ill-tempered leaders of the church in his child hood, which was why Jonathan was so terrified to go on a mission. the second reason was that his worthiness for marriage relied on him to go on a mission, which was taught to both men and women.
The women disregard him and looked at him with disapproval. Jonathan obeyed every law in the church. No matter how hard he tried, Every time he greeted a mormon woman with a kindly hello, She always turned the other way. After one bad experience with a verbally abusive senior elder, he decided then and there to leave the church. Jonathan eventually became an agnostic.
During his thirties, He became a very well read philosophy teacher at a college campus. Unfortunately, crime was starting to rise as a common activity around the campus. One night while he was recently engaged to his fiance Emily, he was murdered in a car bombing set up by a group of gangs in the area.
When Jonathan's spirit traveled to the afterlife
That's where the real story begins, which will be continued at
Chapter 2: The Universe After Death.
during his child hood, Jonathan placed his full trust on the Mormon church Because his parents were very devout. The disgusting behaviors he witnessed from bullies at high school that took drugs, smuggle smut magazines, and violently beaten up kids, Jonathan obviously wanted no part of the world.
through his teen years, Jonathan was diagnosed with depression.
There were a lot of reasons why his depression was connected towards his faith.
the first reason was that he had scary experiences with ill-tempered leaders of the church in his child hood, which was why Jonathan was so terrified to go on a mission. the second reason was that his worthiness for marriage relied on him to go on a mission, which was taught to both men and women.
The women disregard him and looked at him with disapproval. Jonathan obeyed every law in the church. No matter how hard he tried, Every time he greeted a mormon woman with a kindly hello, She always turned the other way. After one bad experience with a verbally abusive senior elder, he decided then and there to leave the church. Jonathan eventually became an agnostic.
During his thirties, He became a very well read philosophy teacher at a college campus. Unfortunately, crime was starting to rise as a common activity around the campus. One night while he was recently engaged to his fiance Emily, he was murdered in a car bombing set up by a group of gangs in the area.
When Jonathan's spirit traveled to the afterlife
That's where the real story begins, which will be continued at
Chapter 2: The Universe After Death.
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